This peice of work is for my informative travel writing.
Descover
Descover London.
Descover Us.
We belive London has more hidden tresures that you think.
You just have to find them.
London. A great city known my many across the world. But how much do you actually known about London. We put on many advents throughout the year to help you to see Londons true colour and not just through a TV screen. Explore the sensational sights, the exqusite shopping centres and see the mysteries that can be solved as you find out about the past from one of the many exhibitions being held. Travel by bus, train or go by foot to see what you can descover today about London.
Our new brochure "Descover London" is out now! Go to our website www.descoverlondon.co.uk to order your free copy and let it be your guide to this beauitiful city.
You have worked really hard on all these pieces showing a good understanding of how language can be adapted in different styles. You use a good range of vocabulary and have created some interesting and appropriate images at times. Just check the accuracy of your work carefully (even on your blog!) You need to check spellings and some of your sentences need more attention with clearer punctuation. However, you are working well and this is all really promising. Well done.
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